Reviews for Drink and Drug - FictionPress.com

starsfallen 2008-05-02 ch 1,	abuseWow...I always had friends that thought they were so cool cuz they drank or did drugs or both. I was the "ONE" that was going to get them to stop so I thought. I had this one friend named Brandy...she was one of those party type girls I told her to stop or something bad would happen, she didn't stop and one night a guy she was seeing shot her in the head at point blank range. I was so mad at her when I found out we hadn't talked in years and there I was wathcing the news when I heard her name and what had happened. Sometimes I think what if I would have tried harder...maybe some tough love or telling her parents...maybe she would still be here, look I am so sorry but this just made me think of her she always thought she was so unquie and the sad thing is she was like so many others that where lost and couldn't find there way. Sorry again.
ohthevoices 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseI liked the double meanings you tried to get through here. ;)
lookin4nemo 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abusewow! THIAS IS MY FAV HAIKU! omg it is amaing! ur title help sthe reader no what ur talking about.. it is amazing! keep writing
Thoughtful Silence 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseI loved how obvious this haiku is, if you get what I mean. I'm not usually a fan of parenthesis in haiku but I liked it in this. The ellipsis and simple question at the end was great! Good job! -Silence