I like how their alternating view points actually overlap; it's interesting. I meant to read these two latest a whole lot sooner, and I'm sorry I was missing out so long; excellent, as usual.

Oh no!
I don't want Luca to get in trouble with Kylie.
This story is so good! Keep writing!

"I couldn’t afford to go discovery channel ‘I need to reproduce’ all of a sudden."
god one! :)

poor luca! the distance is killing him...

Woohoo, and update! A very touching one, at that. I love the universe and story you've created, and can't wait to read more.
Happy writing-

I really like your story so far!
Update soon!
& I've noticed no grammar/spelling mistakes, always a big plus!

"a difficult order to follow..."
mysterious...
I like that!
keep it up and HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT ONE!

this is great! you have to continue it!
I've read your other story too, and it's just BRILLIANT!
don't give up writing!

Hey, this is intriguing! (yay for big words!) Keep writing; I like reading stories that have an interesting plot AND correct grammar, which yours does!