Reviews for Under the Influence

simpleplan13 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseThe heady scent that is you... did you mean heavy? This piece is really beautiful. The word choices were absolutely wonderful and I like the repetition in the beginning and the end a lot. Really wonderful piece.
Manuel Fajar 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseRich and expressive — like a full-bodied Shiraz. Wonderful read : aloud or silently. m sometimes it is a little thing we keep a hair lock or a picture or a shirt that brings eyes loved one closer to red heart endearing soul with a fixation's gaze for it could be heart fears to lose in sleep or sudden death interring love in dirt causing loved one from love to sudden part forever losing mystic kisses' daze but with talisman a plenty i weep for none seem magnet strong enough, just flirt to cause love to impinge her sharpened dart upon an innocent that all does faze
MidnightRequiem 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuse"Until the fortune of Captain Morgan Smiles upon us next weekend." I really like this segment. The poem as a whole is good, too.
fatbird33 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseoo i really liked it. i was actually entranced by it, and yes i do realize how odd that sounds, but it's true.