I like how vague this is. It leaves a lot up to the reader, especially the question "what was written?"

[That I, the actual antagonist] I like the wording here. It sort of goes along with the concept of "fantasy" and "make believe."

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Haha, sounds hard. Congrats on rising to the challenge.

I like the way you interpreted this, as the transition into traiter. It's an interesting metaphor.

[the key I have clenched in my sweaty palm] Nice description. It really shows the character's emotion.

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Reminds me of the condition mirror syndrome, I wonder if that's what you meant?

Anyway I like concept of being the ink stain, it's a really unique metaphor. Actually the main reason I like this piece a lot is because all of your comparisons are unique, different, and very fitting. Really great job.

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"in the sky or under water"... underwater

I really like that last sentence, the repetition and the ellipses makes a really great emphasis. I also really love your descriptions here, the somewhat contradicting nature works really well. I also like the piece because it's relateable. Well done.

I really love your descriptions here, the word choices you use are nice and it works well. I also liked the storyline here, it was intriguing. The emotion of the narrator is really palpable as well. Nicely done.

I like this, it's a great description of the scene. However, I didn't like the kind of lack of emotion though, other than the sweaty palms we have no clue what's going through this person's head. Still it's a nice little piece.

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Ah! I loved them. Great little drabbles. :3 I really liked "Psychiatrist's ink stain". It has to be my favorite besides "Bloodstained Lies".