Hmm...
Great use of imagery, and good job at making me feel it.
Good job at making me understand too, without screaming the meaning in my face.
Altogether, fantastic. :D

Oh, I like this! Particularly the first verse and the line "His hand was fixed on the next handle." And I think that the single words give it an odd, stream-of-consciousness-esque, choppy feel. Beautiful.

I'm not sure I understood what you intended here, but I think this was your point here? The sub-genre says suspense, after all.

I like how the poem seems to tell fragments of a whole story. You flit effortlessly from one image to the next, leaving holes that the reader has to fill. I enjoyed that effect, though it confused me a little.

Great work!