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| kelsi bones 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abusethe last two lines of this are so gorgeous. amazing job, as usual =] k.X |
| Justin A Caynon 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseNice but depressing in a way. Short but powerful. You spelled 'these' wrong I think. |