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| simpleplan13 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abusereally interesting.. I like the parts you italicized and I also loved the personification of the door handles and the trails and whatever else. It was a really unique piece... the only thing is having and on it's own line seemed odd to me, but other than that I really liked it a lot. |