awesome work!

This was so long. It seemed short at first but you had a lot going on. Some of the one liners were a bit too corny at times but the fights and situations were highly entertaining.

OMFG!
Is that Alex thinking that?
Has Alex become EVIL?
WTF!
OMFG!!
Malediction is gonna be fucking PSYCHO!
In the best way possible.
God.
This story keeps getting better and better!
DAMNIT!

So...what are you gonna do now?
Finish After Dawn and then return to Malediction?
Questions Questions Questions.
Drama Drama Drama.
I WANT ANSWERS!
lol

xoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
I fudging love your series.
God Damn.
I can't wait for White Matter.
Message me when you have the first chapter uploaded so I know to check it out.
Cuz this series is freaking amazing.

xoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

OMFGSH!
I'm like...crying my eyes out.
Bawling like a fuckin baby is exactly what I'm doing.
Alex.
Dead.
I can't even believe it.
I hope you pull some trick next chapter an bring him back.

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

SO MUCH FUN!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!

xoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

Oh goodness.
Goodness gracious!!
Poor poor Caleb.

I hope Hawke dies.
I really do.
And I hope Dawson survives.
Him and Alex both.
I really really hope so!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
xoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

Things are finally moving but we have a lot to cover in just 2 chapters and they do seem a lot shorter lately. Is it wrong of me to want the girls to die? Such fickle creatures... Good chapter though, sets up for one sweet fight...

Much like this last this chapter felt more like filler, a means to make the story longer than it needed to be and it really was short and not worth it's own chapter. This and the last should have been combined.

This was my least favorite chapter so far. The opening felt forced and the entire thing just felt a little too filler considering how close to the end it is...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Ugh.
LOVE!
I can't wait for 29.

I have run out of witty little quips to tell you how amazing the chapter is.
lol
So I guess It was great will have to settle.
Sorry.
lol

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

M.
The yum-ity deliciousness of your story knows no bounds.
I can't wait for 28.
hahahaha.
That rhymed.
:]

xoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

lots of blood yayz. good chapter. the fight scenes rocked.

hehehehehehehehe.
This chapter was lovely.
Lots of death, murder, and mayhem.
YUM!

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

hahahahahahaha
I just got back from a 4th celebration party to find one of my favoritest stories ha been updated!
YAY!!
I love this story.
I llove this chapter.
Even though it was a little filler-ish.
Still AMAZING.

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

PS-
Can't wait for the next chapter!