.. I liked it! Does that make me funny?? >.>
It's really well written. I could never do a complicated-type plot like that. I've tried before, but it sortof failed. So, kudos to you!

This is the second story of yours I've read, the other being .. more than a brother's love? Or is it more than brotherly love.. I can't remember exactly, sorry. But I think you're really talented, and you're one of my new favourite authors of the moment! :)

This reminds me alot of Final Destination.

The last bit honestly gave me goosebumps O.o It was a good story. Well-written and with a nice flow.

I liked it, so I guess I'm funny :) Hahaha. And aw, thanks for calling me amazing. So sweet.
This is totally like something Mr. King (the amazing author) would write. Good job!
Faith