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| BettyBoo 2008-07-09 ch 8,  | abuseOh, Nya - why?!! |
| readergirl1 2008-07-08 ch 8, | abuseI'm sorry but Nya can be a real idiot sometimes! Why would she put herself in this same sticky situations with these two brothers again! The whole brother thing is kinda skeezy to me anyway. Sometimes I think thats she's just a pawn they use to one-up each other. Even though Cole is being the charmer..but still. There is no reason to dump Adora or uproot her entire situation and move in with Cole. I'm really not seeing why that's necessary. I dont think she should go anywhere. She cant just date the man and stay right where she is? |
| XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-07-08 ch 8, | abuseI am so glad that Nya confessed to Adora! Finally, no more secrets! I hope things go smoothly with Cole. As for Vincent, it was unexpected that he works at the flower shop, and I CANNOT believe he REALLY expected her to WAIT for him to just come back. He is living in a dream world! I wonder if he really is gonna accept Nya moving on? Great update! Keep 'em coming! PLEASE! |
| readergirl1 2008-06-21 ch 7, | abuseOk I have to grudgingly admit that Cole is getting to me. And Maximus is just nasty all the way around. LOL...please dont let that be Vincent at the flower shop! That would be just too much! |
| CR7GIRL 2008-06-20 ch 7, | abuseIS IT VINCE?! |
| mysticfox19 2008-06-20 ch 7, | abuseI'm glad Maximus got what was coming to him. I hope she hasn't run into Vincent. I'm starting to like Cole more and more. Great update! |
| XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-06-19 ch 7, | abuseOh, you are so mean! Leaving us with a cliffhanger like that! Well, I still enjoyed that chapter! I really wish Cole laid it into Maximus a little more, but at least he's away from both of them now! I just hope he's not gonna get crazy and start stalking them or something! |
| readergirl1 2008-05-27 ch 6, | abuseI say Maximus has the hots for Cole. I stll dont know about Nya with Cole but she seems to want him just like Cole wants her even though she's doing her usual song and dance with him. Jeffrey...ew! |
| mysticfox19 2008-05-27 ch 6, | abuseThey're so cute together!! I still have a feeling that Jefferey is up to no kind of good and Vincent will pop up soon. |
| awritingfantasy 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abuseI adore your story and the previous one. Very nice, keep it up... |
| XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abuseThey are so cute, I love them. Cole has grown on me. I don't know how I feel about Vincent and if and when he shows up, I don't know how I'll react. It was another great update. I hope Cole gets rid of Maximus, b/c he's kinda freaky! |
| CR7GIRL 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abusei want a cole of my own. how cute to go show up at her place at 4 in the morning! |
| mysticfox19 2008-05-22 ch 5, | abuseYay! I'm glad you're continuing the story. I want to find a Cole!! I don't like that Maximus or that Jeffery, they both seem like bookoos of trouble. Update soon! |
| XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseJeffrey is creepy, why isn't he in jail for beating that man's car? Nya needs to get rid of him! Maximus is jealous of Nya? Does he want to take her place at Demetri's side?? That is just great! Cole can't be that blind! Anyway, I loved the update, it was awesome! |
| readergirl1 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseThats what I say. Here we go again! |