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| tonight we storm 2008-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseloved it. sounds like somebody tired of looking happy for people, when really they only feel a hurt from a loss, maybe missing a particular woman--"void without her stars"?-- loved it, adding to favorites. please review some of mine, thanks |
| theredkatana 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWhat a powerful way to describe such unadulterated loneliness. It makes me think of the painful masks we are forced to fabricate to save face. Very good. |