Reviews for Making Him Believe

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Sacred flower 2008-08-27 ch 13,	abuseomg...how can he not notice that she is madly in love with him...I hope he notices soon.
xiia0moonlight 2008-08-23 ch 13,	abuseargh . david , why cant he just see that megan likes him so much ? zz .
Hateful Loving 2008-08-22 ch 13,	abusethat was good and i would love to read more. Please update soon. ~Hateful Loving~ P.S. this is Calibabe i jsut changed my name! :P
deli28 2008-08-21 ch 13,	abuseI would love for you to spped it up but i'd NEVER ask that. Mainly because of two reasons. First i don't want the quality to go away and Second I used to write on fictionpress (on a diff account) and i understnad that the authors have REAL LIVES! lollzz and Third (okay that was three) the suspense is good. Because when a chapter does come out i take my time reading it and acutally READ it and think about it instead of skimming it like i usually do. :D So great job!
happy ever afterxx 2008-08-21 ch 13,	abusePace is fine, love the story, want more soon! (God I sound like a five year old)
Kohlomere 2008-08-21 ch 13,	abuseI've decided that David doesn't deserve Megan. Make him do something to restore my faith in him, please =D. Great work, E.
Ciaobellla 2008-08-21 ch 1,	abuseBAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA this line CRACKS me up so bad. 'day one alone: I saw a cat outside and wanted to chase it. Instead I cried.' i can't stop giggling!! hehe. awesome story! ;)
.hopeless.romantic.x3 2008-08-21 ch 13,	abuseoh...poor megan...can't wait to see wht happens in the next chapter!
soccer diva 2008-08-21 ch 13, anon.	abusei think that going at a slower pace develops their relationship more realistically. Most people, after all, don't fall in love at first sight, and if they do, they don't act like they've been together for three years already. :) I like your pace. It's a good change from most romance novels. Anyhow, I like this chapter a lot, because it gives us more insight on how everybody is feeling: Megan, David, and maybe most importantly, Sam. He will be a good ally for Megan, I think, but it also lets the reader know that their charade isn't all that believable... so there are my two cents in the pot, hope they're worth something ^_^
princessbleachhead 2008-08-21 ch 13,	abuseOMG. how did sam notice? dat whore darlene wat she playing it. i loved this chapter, bcz you start to see megan's feelings being exposed. i loved it. bless sam, he is a great dad to his sons. i wonder why darlene is so evil and uptight, she reminds me of dat mother in law from monster in law lol. she needs to spend a day with meg lol. but i loved it, the story is great, keep going. i love the way sam smooths meg. and he begs her to be strong. i bet she is regreeting this whole thing. well cant wait for the next chapter.
Den-KitStock 2008-08-21 ch 13,	abusePoor Megan! I'm so sad for her, that I hate David!(Not all the time just now ;D) You seriously don't have to speed the story up. This way it won't be too fast and it will be longer so we don't have to goodbye to it for a while...
SweetDenial 2008-08-21 ch 13,	abuseDavid's too oblivious! Oh poor Megan, how painful it must be for her.
brita 2008-08-20 ch 12, anon.	abuseabsolutly not its not moving to slow at all in fact i never want it to end lol but i think her sudden realization or watever it was at the club was perfect jut the right pace if u want to pick it up though i can see that being done too peace :D
Hateful Loving 2008-08-16 ch 12,	abuseThat was really good and cant wait to read more so please update soon. ~Cali~ P.S. im not really from california i just really love it so thats why its my name but im thinking of changing it :P
crosen 2008-08-13 ch 12,	abuseHey! I loved this chapter, I'm not sure why, maybe because he finally kissed her..which brings me to your question, I do think its moving slowly. They have both considered that they like each other and I was so happy when David finally made a move, as small as it was. I think you can safely speed up their love lifes. Lol, alright now don't get me wrong I still love it, so I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

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