It Does sound like a song... and I LOVE it.
It's super b-e-a-u-tiful...
Gold star? Yep; gold star.

yes, the ever-present feeling of the third wheel. :( wish it would just go away.
good poem, I liked it. :)

I was reminded of a song-chorus as I read this.
I'm not sure why; maybe because this flows fast and the pace and rhyming remind me of lyrics. =P

Nice job!