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Reviews For: Earth Angel
Almsivi
2008-04-22
ch 1, 		abuseGood job! You use beautiful imagery, and I've never seen someone use "tastes the sun" before. It didn't rhyme, but it was free verse, so that's fine. The poem is a nice break from all the sad ones I've been reading (and writing!) lately.
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