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| Aquafied 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseexhale. |
| Nemonus 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI don't get it. Other reviewers seem to, so maybe it's just me, but...beginning a sentence with "Bringing" and that being the only verb in it threw me off. I couldn't picture "the velvet word". There is nice imagery in here, but it's abstract and not especially serene. I love the idea of paired haikus, Inhale and Exhale, though, and maybe once I read the next one I'll understand better. |
| she smolders 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI tried yoga for the first time last week and the relaxed feeling in left in me reminds me of this haiku. I take too many things for granted these days and then remember what life really means in poetry and meditation. Take care, this is beautiful. |
| Brown Eyed Goddess 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. It somehow makes sense..or..not..to me. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseLoved the last line - 'Birth to new voices'. It puts me into a mindset of echoes and whispers. |