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| Black Kettle Tea 2008-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it mainly because I can relate. My friends and I are like that too. I especially liked your last line. "Rondomizim is what sometimes makes friends seem more like family". Loved it. Only one thing: Whipping whip cream at each other. That just seemed repetitive. Try using another word like...chucking or dumping? Anyways, beside that little pet peevie poo ^^ Great job! keep up the good work! |
| Beauty From Pain 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love random moments. They make life so interesting, and give a smile on my face. I liked the line about wedding dresses cuz I love wedding dresses ^_^ Nice poem! |