This is a fantastic story! However I only got like half done because it's so long. Don't get me wrong long is good, but not when I'm sitting in 2nd period! the tardy bell just rung so I got to go to science but I really like this story so far.

Nice!

Very cool fights, and a pretty cool reveal! Looking forward to seeing what happens to Robert!

I have to say, this is a pretty damn gritty series, especially compared to Den of Thieves. Sex slaves, dark sacrifices, demonic deals, and worse.

Hehehe. You go, Lynn.

Had fun reading this chapter. Hoping for another update within two months or so. See ya.

Very good chapter, took ya long enough but very good chapter. Heh. You started it off in a big way with that fight though it was nice to see the rest of the story from there drift away from the action a bit. During that whole thing with Robert and Lynn I was letting out a long and well-overstressed "AW". It's nice to see Robert humanized like that, off the battlefield and enjoying a nice little not-date. Then again I never thought I would say anything about humanizing the devil's son... Moving on, introducing Minos as the villain was a nice touch though his taste in aliases was pretty obvious. All that said my main complaint with this chapter is the cliif hanger mainly because I know how long it will be till the next chapter. XD

Also, this line made me chuckle:

"Whatever! Be gay if you want, I don't care!" ololrandom

I've been waiting SO long for this chapter. Loved the fight with Baal. And the exploding building was a nice touch.

(As Robert raced through the gigantic holes leading the outer wall, he couldn't help but think "I can't # %&ing believe I have to do this AGAIN!")

Unfortunatly, it doesn't look like his next escapade is going to end very well.

Excellent chapter! I've been looking forward to the rest of this story for a while, and its' good to see it continued. I liked the 'hell in an office buidling' theme, and the little asides to true psychos like Charles Taylor. The American Psyco reference was great too. As usual the demons were cool foes and Robert's nonchalant noir attitude is a lot of fun. My only real problem is that some of the violence, particularly the sexual stuff, is a little much. Have the camera pull away at a certain moment might be better than showing the actual goregasm. Then again, they are demons out of Hell, so I guess it's to be expected. Again, good job and I hope to read more.

Very good chapter. It was great to finally see the bad guys and get a sense of who they are. Which in this case is a fat, sadistic, hedonist and a business man who sold his daughter out to get revenge on someone who ruined the life of him and his family. Oh, the irony on that last one. I liked the action toward the end and I can't wait to see Robert go toe-to-toe with Baal.

I only just finished the first chapter but this story looks very good, which is expected of you really. I especially like the religious aspects, something I myself like to work into my writing. I hope this story retains the same quality as your other stuff. Wow, my favorites list is getting full of John Westcott. XD

I've wanted to start this one for a while, and I just got around to it. I really liked the concept and the first chapter was great. I was wondering if you ever heard of Garth Ennis's Chronicles of Wormwood series? I think it deals with a similar thing, though it seems a lot more humorous than yours. Anyway, I thought this was a good first chapter and the ending was a classic hook. I'm looking forward to reading more.