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Reviews For: Rustic Dawn
Flight of the Fire
2008-04-15
ch 1, 		abuseI loved how you fit the title in there. This paints quite a vivid picture. Awesome.
Tranquil Thorns
2008-04-14
ch 1, 		abuseNice and simple. (:

I like your rhyme scheme, too.
The last line summed everything together nicely.
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