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| a silenced revolution 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abusethe surrealism here has a way of being very vivid and evocative. intriguing, detailed language. i like the confusing, yet somehow fitting, ending. 'into dialated peoples.' --maybe this was deliberate, but i'm thinking you may have meant 'pupils'. if not, interesting image. -adrian |