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| ohthevoices 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseHaikus are hard because you have to express something in a very limited space...but you nailed it. Great job! |
| Maya Wright 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, you are really good at these! |
| Dark-Lady-Shippo 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseAh a expresion of love threw a haiku, very nice. ~Shippo |
| Edensong 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuse'I just can't breathe... I never have felt so alive'... Irony and poetry are tea-party buddies. It's so hard to be expressive in a haiku but you nailed it. Great job keep writing! |
| Astrum Viscus 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAs I'm sure I've stated on various occasions to many people, I'm not much of a haiku girl. Hell if half the time I know what the underlying message is. But, for a poem of few words, I truly connected with this one and found it almost enchantingly deep for such a small phrase. |