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Reviews For: Just Breathe
stars.are.watching 2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Haikus are hard because you have to express something in a very limited space...but you nailed it. Great job!
Maya Wright 2008-04-16 . chapter 1
Beautiful, you are really good at these!
Nuying 2008-04-15 . chapter 1
Ah a expresion of love threw a haiku, very nice.
~Shippo
Edensong 2008-04-14 . chapter 1
'I just can't breathe... I never have felt so alive'... Irony and poetry are tea-party buddies. It's so hard to be expressive in a haiku but you nailed it. Great job keep writing!
Lynell 2008-04-14 . chapter 1
As I'm sure I've stated on various occasions to many people,
I'm not much of a haiku girl.
Hell if half the time I know what the underlying message is.
But,
for a poem of few words,
I truly connected with this one and found it almost enchantingly deep for such a small phrase.
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