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| Froztique 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseOoh. Deceptive. Intrigueing. Nice structure. It was very organized and very good word usage. It really caught my intrest by the title. Mainly because i absolutly love the word Phantom. I dont know why so dont jusdge me Dx But very good job with this one. Your poetry is always good. *feels like a broken record* Keep it up! HeartsSmilesAndWhatnot ANI |
| Lurid Black 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! Sweet! There isn't a line in there that doesn't make me smile at how well this was written! Things like 'As words cut deep' and 'As lies corrupt' make this poem my favourite. ~Lurid~ |
| iloveanimecartoons 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseO...M...G! You just detailed the majority of my childhood-early adulthood! That poem really reached down into me and grasped my heart till I nearly gasped in recollection. It...it really blew me away. Words...are powerful, heavy, dangerous, and lasting...and damaging. You're poem displayed that faultlessly. I'm gonna have to add this to my favorites! Great job!. |