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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseI must not be myself b/c I have yet to read that brought tears down my cheeks untill this...I guess was just trying to ignore all that. Painful it is, i'm giving in. nice poem. adding to c2 XKristie MarieX |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI've been on this site for five years and you are the only guy I know who writes romantic love poems like this. This is very romantic and deep. I know this sounds silly but coming from a girl have you tired talking with her? I complain all the time about guys not noticing but I really only focus on the ones that draw my attention. You should talk with her. Oh, and I love your usage of repition. |