My Lord, I love the way you write! Seriously, have you been published anywhere? If not, I definitely suggest sending in some of your stuff to some journals.

I love this story. You write convincingly from a female point of view, which is always impressive to me. I also love your writing style because it is so straight forward and simple, but at the same time, every so often you have these delicately beautiful lines. I wish I had thought to copy down the ones that stood out to me as I read, but sadly I didn't.

Congrats on a good plot too, very dynamic, and you didn't go with the expected ending.

I really enjoyed. Can't wait to read more!

Emily