Reviews for Expressionless Child

Zonne
2008-04-20
ch 1,

abusea couple typos -- like the last word fount should be found

also, start a new paragraph for each speaker. Makes it clearer who is talking.

What a HORRIBLE statement to make. I assume the mom said it to the daughter.

Very sad piece. Good job at writing it.

Zonne
the review marathon link in my profile

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