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| simpleplan13 2008-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful imagery and personification. The question at the end was really the best part though because it was so unexpected and interesting. |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusei like this. but i do agree with your tagline, it might need a little bit more editing. but great job. -sv |
| ode to melancholy 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseGood question. (Phases are hard, aren't they? :P) I really like this one. It's beautiful. And hopeful, in a way. Or maybe sad (the ending, that is). I dunno. I really like it. It's all... golden xD |