Reviews for Tick Tock: Prequel

Faith Adeline
2008-04-15
ch 1,

abuseI read the short story before reading this (which was heartbreaking by the way) and I have to say this did explain why she'd do such a tragic thing. Sigh. Great job at such a strong piece (and the original)
Faith

first-casualty-of-war
2008-04-15
ch 1,

abuseHullo =) Well, first off I wanted to thank you for your review.

And second off, I wanted to say GRR, because this prequel makes it really hard to restrain myself from skipping off to read Tick Tock. (I have homework I've procrastinated on for far too long)

I loved this line: "I feel his warm breath ghosting along my upturned cheek."
When I have time, I'll definitely come back to read your whole story. See ya =)
(thanks again for the review!)

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