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| kisses-and-gasoline 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis one sounds like a song... The irony in the last line sums it up brilliantly, I think. |
| Sincerely Agnes 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is a really interesting poem. I like the imagery of the awkward teen girl, the 'blue fingernails, dark circles' and so on. And the last line, especially, does a good job of making you think about the rest of it--very snappy, but not in a shallow way. ^^ Anyway, I like it. Keep it up! ~Sincerely Agnes |