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| Clarelouise 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abusewoow you write soo prettily faerie! i loved these descriptions, th way you set the bubbles free. i think my favourite line is 'blowing in their souls the breath of life'; it really captures the way you see the bubbles as living things, and how you are setting them free. the end is also reallyu cool, love it :D |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseReally interesting piece... the imagery is very unique and well done... I also like the flow to shorter and then longer when you switch to it being about you. Really really great piece. |
| FellowMan 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusewow, what a lovely eruption of an idea! The wording is enchanting--Great Job! |
| kloun doll 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusewow, the imagery is nice, I think your thoughts in this poem are pretty deep, maybe sometimes everybody feels like that. |