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| PheonixLament 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseI'm not sure, but I think I know exactly what painting this is. I don't know the name of it[i'm no good with names], but I'm sure I've seen it. Maybe it's just that you've described it so well that you've re-painted it inside my own head. Great poem. |
| clockwork Kiss 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusei like this, nice metaphors. the spire line's really good. haven't seen the painting, but i get a very apocolyptic feel. i like th imagery of Hope wandering the streets, but i think the last line is a bit cliche and could be stronger. any way, nice work, this is the only poem i've found tonight that was good enough to review. |
| FellowMan 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseVery nice; nice lilts |