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| PheonixLament 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseThe helplessness makes me claustrophobic. This poem is amazing. I feel so trapped, after reading it. Depressing, but honestly so. But it is also hopeful. Your narrator does not give up. "ceaselessly trying to escape." Beautifully written, very emotional for me. |