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| Gangrene 2008-06-30 ch 1,  | abuseThe last stanza is particularly awesome. I really enjoyed reading this, which says a lot because I don't generally enjoy poetry. Now I'm going to be mulling over this poem all night. :P A great read, keep writing, and all of that other cliche stuff. |
| peaceinafrica 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. I usually have a lot to say about what I read. I don't have too much about this, probably because it's really good. The first stanza is very powerful. And that power doesn't diminish throughout the entire poem, which I believe is difficult to do. It's really well done. |