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| Nyx Raisa 2008-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseHm. Curious. I can't say that I know a thing about chemistry, but I recognize a metaphor when I see one. Aside from my lack of knowledge in things chemical, I enjoyed it. I like the repetition of the "Oh." I'm wondering what exactly it means, what it's about? And I couldn't tell you how to keep your formatting. This site's kind of a butt about that sort of thing. |