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Hele 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseSorry, I forgot to say before. The first chapter shows a good level of description and mixture of sentence lengths and structures.
Hele 2008-04-21 ch 2, anon.	abuseNeither of these made me laugh. I found the main character (Kevin/Henry- for goodness' sake, it doesn't take much to keep the main character's name consistant) of the first chapter utterly objectionable and unsympathetic. I also don't really understand why you found the need to tell me about someone taking out some rubbish. It's not exciting or interesting, and it certainly wasn't funny. I found the poem in the second chapter simply inane. It didn't say anything. There just didn't seem to be any point to any of this. I didn't feel that you had tried to achieve anything with either piece of work. If you would like to take issue with what I've said, feel free to e-mail me.
xSoSleepyx 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abuseErr... Cute. ^.^