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| simpleplan13 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThe first line is past and the rest is present which seems odd, but other other than that I liked it a lot. The imagery was really powerful and beautiful.. great piece. |
| Manuel Fajar 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseyour work grows stronger and more powerfully evocative with each poem. :-) m |