|Reviews for Collection of poems|
| AK the Twilight 8/20/08 . chapter 1
Aside from the formatting issue (go ahead and make separate chapters for each poem), they seemed to follow similar tunes. Poem 2 in the depressidish poems was particularly good. Also, although it was short, Style was a good rhyming poem. It didn't lose meaning despite being forced to rhyme. The rest of the poems, though good and emotional, lack imagery, excluding a select few. Try to add some more of the dynamic words seen in Perfidy and Imaginary World.
Your poetry is packed with strong emotion, and in the cases of Perfidy and Imaginary World, great imagery. Just try to make this strong imagery and such last throughout all of your work. Overall, though, good job. Your poetry is very worthwhile to read.