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| Fuji Syusuke 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseYay, that was awesome. I hope with the new rewrite comes more updates, I can't wait to read more! |
| SecretFeelings 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseSee, I knew it was going to happen. Yet I still laughed hysterically. |
| chocolatechipash 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusenot a bad start, but i liked the other version better but im excited to see how this will turn out. this one lacks something but yeah i think it was a good idea to introduce meghan earlier unlike whatever it takes. update soon, hope this one works out better for you. |
| puka.shells 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseooh. what will she say? i want ellie and max, together. even if it will be a long run, as long as they're together in the end. and if not, just don't put meghan in the picture. i'd rather have him single, or go gay with eric, or something. lol. sorry, though seriously, i love ellie. but shes rather biatchy here. |
| sweets555 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseadorable! Though at one point you wrote 'thin' instead of 'think' great job! |
| katieee 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseIt was torture reading through this the first time. Feeling so bad for Max, and then wishing that Meaghan wouldn't get him. And now I have to do it again. But hopefully Ellie and Max will get together. Like my other review, he likes Ellie more. |
| Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseholy cow. i'm totally laughing. i love how becca pushed her had down. thats great. there were a few gramatical errors. you left a few words out. i think you can catch them if you read over it. i really like the story line. i'll deffinitely continue reading. SWEM |
| RoseofFlame 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWoot! Oh my gosh I started reading this and thought to myself "wow, this seems awfully familiar... to that one story I read... what was it called?" And then i read the part before the chapter and it clicked. I'm excited this story is starting up, I missed Max's shenanigans (: |
| X 2008-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's nice. it's like the perfect high school cliche - which isnt always a bad thing. it kind of reminds me of james and lily potter from Harry Potter (i'm a die hard fan!) keep on writing! peace |
| naadz 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusehey!yay im happy this is back..is it going to be like the last one?and are you going to finish it this time?:)i hope you do |
| Yo Yo Yo 2008-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseuh funny and good, but the last 3 seconds... uh.. hahah keep on going! |