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| from beneath the bell jar 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseOH this flows so wonderfully. The rhyme scheme is great. This poem is actually quite amazing. I liked every line. Love the concept too, that is if I'm interpreting it correctly. Fighting off a love you know isn't good for you but putting up walls, or "iron fences" (great phrase by the way), but knows it's inevitable...? Did I get that right? Anyway, awesome kickass piece. Well done. Adding it to my c2. Maybe if you get a sec you could check out my poem "Silence"? |