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ThirtyTwoDays 2008-07-20 ch 5,	abuseAHH! Been reading from the start, and I LOVE the ending to ch. 5!! The way you write, I feel like I have cotton in my mouth afterwards. Like if I say something, it's breaking an unspeakable code. :D Keep writing!! I'm really excited for the next chapter!
PrincessPeach131 2008-07-16 ch 5,	abuseI love this story, it's so unique and from such an interesting perspective! I hope you write more soon!
SavannahX 2008-07-01 ch 2,	abuseKarina sounds like an interesting person. I'm wondering why she doesn't talk however. There must be some reason and I'm guessing you'll unveil that later on. As for constructive critism... well, honestly I can't think of any at this point. You have a good start and I'll definitley continue reading!
SavannahX 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuseHey! I like this! It's got a good start! I especially like how you didn't give away too much information.
Eloiria 2008-06-22 ch 5,	abusebeen long since i've reviewed... I like the whole plot and all, love your writing style and i'm waiting for more :)
Enigmatic Margaret 2008-06-18 ch 5,	abuseHeyHey! Silly me, I put your story on my favs but didn't put in on alert!! Haha, yay for you- exams are done. I'm in the midsts of mine, and it's hell in flourescently lit lecture theatres. I must say, I'm already in-like with Serene! She's brilliant and her name is perfect. She's anything but serene, but leaves everyone else feeling serene- kinda. Hm, just how perceptive IS Edward? Well, well done again on an interesting chapter. I better get back to studying, yippe.
Sarahj259 2008-06-13 ch 5,	abusewow...you're friggin awesome!
devil's-fav-angel 2008-06-13 ch 5,	abusereally interesting story
Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-06-13 ch 5,	abuseYAY! He knows! :D That makes me happy (today is the third to last day of school, so I'm busy this morning and can't talk) I love her new friend, she looks like fun, and the whole story is fantastic. Loves loves!! LLama
Athraa 2008-06-13 ch 5, anon.	abuseI love it! This isn't going to be another story that'll be left unfinished right? Because I know lots of stories do, and I hate when I start reading a good story and then it's not finished. But I really really like this one. I've always wanted to write something like that... with the whole silence thing. But I've already started too many that need to get done. But anyway, I really like this. It's awesome.
funnechick 2008-06-12 ch 5,	abuseWow. So, usually I find stories with so much description and not a lot of dialogue really boring, but it works so well with this story. It's so interesting and original. I can't wait to read more. Oh, and I'm completely confused by the English system of schooling (I'm American) and even though it's been explained in other stories I've read, I still don't quite get it. If you could be the one that actually makes it stick in my brain, I'd be eternally grateful. :)
FallenDreams03395 2008-06-12 ch 5,	abuseHello! I'm really liking your style of writing:) so mature and at the same time...unexplainable because it's that good. Loving the story...it's so interesting. I really am curious to find out Karina's past and how it all came to how she is now. :)Thanks for updating
write-the-world 2008-06-12 ch 5,	abuseI've been waiting for this chapter, and it definitely didn't disappoint! It was very entertaining, and I thought that Selene was an excellent addition. Her banter with Lloyd was very funny. And the Fred/George thing- I can't help it, I adore a good Harry Potter reference like nothing else. Edward was very sweet at the end, and I can't help but wonder if he's just extremely perceptive, or if something else is going on (dun dun dun) Anyway, fantabulous chapter, and I can't wait for the next!
Musical Morphine 2008-06-12 ch 5,	abuseI am in love with your story. Truly, madly and deeply- don't think Cascada, I hate her guts, hehe. But, really. It's amazing. I didn't talk for 6 months once. It's a long story but it was a righteous reason. I'm interested to see Kat's. Your story is amazing, update soon! M/M.
sarahrules336 2008-06-12 ch 5,	abusei love edward and selene! they're awesome, just like gina! i want to hear her talk. update soon!

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