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| she smolders 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseWinter is a always a season that feels like it will last forever to me, but then it's over and I find that I miss it. I love the comparison to a "December day" and the way you have with words. Take care. |
| Ashelin 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really enjoyed this. I don't know if it's because it's so personal and yet slightly vague, like we're supposed to already know everything but at the same time we're not. I don't know, but I really liked the thoughts and unified expressions and imagery. You did a great job. |