that was relly good plz add more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is such a goood story....i luv it, it's exciting and detailed!

I must say, it was an interesting story, one with pretty well developed characters and a plot with a lot of potential! The only real downsides I saw were a really fast pace (could have slowed down in some parts a bit...) and maybe a bit more description of the world would have been nice (an essential for fantasy, in my opinion). Overall, good story, and I would be curious as to see how it progresses:)

Cool, keep it going! ^_^