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Reviews For: My Window
Elephant-Artist 2009-03-13 . chapter 1
Taint the glass. Awesome description. You have really good descriptions. If you make it longer so it can have more descriptions it will be even better.
Lone Lily in the Garden 2008-10-22 . chapter 1
I love this poem!! Beautiful!
Patricia Louise 2008-08-30 . chapter 1
I like the imagry in this one! Sorry it took me so long to get around to this one! I really love it!
Professor Doctor 2008-05-06 . chapter 1
Wow.
Something bad must have been happening.
I'm sorry.

-Ari
ADSpencer 2008-04-16 . chapter 1
Excellent use of phrasing. I really enjoyed this one.
storykeeper 2008-04-16 . chapter 1
Why write about a non-existant window?... jk. I like it!
Random-Idiocity 2008-04-16 . chapter 1
This was great, I like for how such few words it's not disappointing. And you have lovely imagery. Keep it Up!
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