 Elephant-Artist 2009-03-13 . chapter 1Taint the glass. Awesome description. You have really good descriptions. If you make it longer so it can have more descriptions it will be even better. |
 Lone Lily in the Garden 2008-10-22 . chapter 1I love this poem!! Beautiful! |
 Patricia Louise 2008-08-30 . chapter 1I like the imagry in this one! Sorry it took me so long to get around to this one! I really love it! |
 Professor Doctor 2008-05-06 . chapter 1Wow.
Something bad must have been happening.
I'm sorry.
-Ari |
 ADSpencer 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Excellent use of phrasing. I really enjoyed this one. |
 storykeeper 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Why write about a non-existant window?... jk. I like it! |
 Random-Idiocity 2008-04-16 . chapter 1This was great, I like for how such few words it's not disappointing. And you have lovely imagery. Keep it Up! |