Absolutely fantastic. Gorgeously written. Beautifully done, etc. Really, really touching; and I can relate to this extremely well, so I love it all the more for that.

This piece of writing is just fantastic, and I would actually really love to see more; perhaps a multi-chaptered fic with the same theme? *Hint Hint*

But seriously, I love, love, love this!

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That was a beautiful story. I love it. I understand it perfectly, cause growing up, I was the fat kid. Great job.

Great zing. I loved the last line. ;D Very nicely done. I really enjoyed reading this.

Do you even know how much I love this? Not only is the writing style beautiful, flawless, but the message is as well.

It's unfortunate you hate eating, but it's understandable because many people, no matter the weight, feel this way. I find the way a woman eats to be a great representation of their available passion. If a woman can't eat with love and enjoyment, such a simple thing in life, what does that say for more important things in your relationship?

There are two things in life that I truly hate:
people mocking gay people, and people mocking fat people.

I am neither of these things, but judging someone for either is so completely ridiculous, disgusting, and horrifying. Sometimes I can't even believe I live in the same world who hates someone for being fat or gay or whatever.

I try not to judge on either side, but I have found "fat" girls and guys to be a lot more interesting, passionate, kind, sensitive, fun, hilarious, etc etc etc than the average or skinny type. I don't want to be a hypocrite, so I'm not going to say that I only hang out with fat people because skinny people are boring, because that's not true at all. Both sides have their good people and bad people, but a lot of times "fat" people have to make up with the horrible status society gives them by having killer personalities that the people who matter, hopefully, notice.

And I say, good for you society. Keep on doing that. The more interesting people, the better. sometimes what society does to people is a good thing, if you can just get past what they say. It's just a bunch of boring, shallow people saying it anyway, but I know it's not easy to just "let go".

I think the reason fat is so detested is because it's lumped in with letting yourself go, being dirty, smelly, not taking care of yourself, not brushing your hair, not taking in the right nutrition, being sloppy, so forth. Because a lot of people that let themselves go don't maintain their health, therefore they get fat, and this is the bad kind of fat, because it's unhealthy. The kind you described is different, and it's unfair that it's put it with people who have many other things wrong with them besides just being fat. I would never, ever think of judging someone positively or negatively for their weight, if it's apparent they're not a disgusting person at all.

I'm sorry, this review is ridiculously long. I don't know if you truly are the "fat girl", but this was a great piece. If you are this sort of person, eat your chocolate, dance until you pass out, write more, be my friend.

People can be so much worse than fat. I wish more would realize this.

I know. I hate eating and public. And because I get the shakes if I don't eat, I have to snack a lot at school, so people think I eat a ** load. D: It's hard.

:)