Reviews for If I Can't Have You, I Can't

Bremen the Dwarf 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abusePerfect execution, how the rest of the poem ties in with the title. I like how the first thing you see, the title, gives a sort of hint at the content, but doesn't quite make sense until the last stanza. Beautifully written and darker than the deepest depths of a soul in eternal torment.
Random-Idiocity 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abuseSome good imagery and wonderful flow in this piece. Keep it Up!