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| PrettiestWretchedWhore 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseSo far so good! I like how you let the reader in little by little. There were a few minor mistakes like intently was probably meant to be intensely and you spelt creek "crick but it was still entertaining. I can't wait to read what happens next! ~Keep Writing!~ |