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eville 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abusenot sure how i missed this one when i reviewd your newest yesterday, but i really like this.
One-Hand Clap 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseOne thing I liked about this poem was how you likened your eyes to fruit. 'me eyes ripen' - it's a very interesting phrase, that one. It kinda sticks with me. So it's very odd imagery... but in a good way, ayuh. However I thought this line: 'but I never want to die again' Was somewhat clumsy - I don't know how you could change it about, but it seemed kinda out of place in an otherwise surrealistic poem. It would've been good if you compared it to your fruit analogy again, ie: 'but I never want to rot again' I don't know, these are just my mediocre two cents! - Clap Trap, from Review marathon [link in profile]
Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abuseSo pretty and childlike. In a way the general tone reminds me of regression, especially around the line 'but I never want to die again'. It seems as though the narrator retreats to a younger state to try to shield him/her self. You can blame psychology class on that one. =P Anywho, beautiful work.