this chapter was what i was expecting. but that's ok I need to read more to see where it goes from here. how about for a summary you write an adventure between two lovers in a mytical world. I'm looking foreward to see how it develops.

IS she oK?

"'I never had to deal with it, but that does not mean that I cannot be here. Sometime silent comfort is the best, and only comfort.' I thought."

Aw, I love that sentence.


Good so far! :)

I liked this chapter bc we saw more character development. But, I'd like to see even more character development. I enjoy these characters. Especially Knight. I want to know more about him.

Oh!

What?! Why?! I'm concerned

i'm interested to see how this turns out. keep it up. nice name usage.