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| rassoodock 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseright on, sister. |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI like how this has a specific progression. Thoughts in exploration really, like you're writing what you might think two minutes from now if your brain could catch up to the pen or keyboard. Paints a vivid picture, but that's what makes it work. Sincerity of emotion. Well written. MD:77. |
| aprettywar 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusei LOVE everything about this -- it all rings so true. the rhythm is also just excellent. great work! :) |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is so... strange, but amazing at the same time. It changes so much from beginning to end, but Jesus the last line explains like everything. It was ** epic. This was great. It was a lot longer than most of the other stuff you've written (that I've gotten around to reading anyway), and I liked that. -stix- |