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rassoodock
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseright on, sister.
Moondog Dozier
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseI like how this has a specific progression. Thoughts in exploration really, like you're writing what you might think two minutes from now if your brain could catch up to the pen or keyboard. Paints a vivid picture, but that's what makes it work. Sincerity of emotion. Well written. MD:77.
aprettywar
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abusei LOVE everything about this -- it all rings so true. the rhythm is also just excellent. great work! :)
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseThis is so... strange, but amazing at the same time. It changes so much from beginning to end, but Jesus the last line explains like everything. It was ** epic.

This was great. It was a lot longer than most of the other stuff you've written (that I've gotten around to reading anyway), and I liked that.

-stix-
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