You're story is awesome! I read the first few lines and had to read the rest. Only thing is where's the end? What happens on Van's trip? Why does the coffee taste odd to Van?

Amazing descriptions. All this foreshadowing is killing me. Something is going to happen to Van, isn't it? Wait no, don't tell me! Tell me his instead - what is it that Robyn does exactly? I know that she mentioned something in the first chapter, but it was seriously vague, and I was just wondering how come she's so...alert and in tune with her surroundings and seems like quite a suspicious person (if you get what I mean). Gr this is probably just me fishing into her background, but I'm really curious.

Excellent chapter. I'm going to get some coffee now. Haha.

I like the way you right. I've been on a veronica mars kick recently (please don't judge me! lol) and this has one of those old dectective film feels to it. I like it. And I like the coffee.

I like it all!!

:) P.S. why do you not have more reviews?