Ohmygoshh. I'm completely inlove with this story! I so totally thought that Dean liked Nathan, it's so cute :3 I don't know who I want Nathan to end up with, 'cause I lovee both Riley and Dean the samee, ahah. Pretty pleasse update soon, yeah? :D

I thought that's what it was... and so you cannot leave this here! No! =]

I'm totally curious about Dean now...

Made my day finding this-- I was so in the mood for something with a bit of sport in it!

And I love the reaction his sister gave... wanting him to be more 'flaming' =]

Awesome here so far!

Oh~ the drama. >3
Why do I love you so much?!

Why Dean?!??!!
I had a feeling that's what was up.

okay listen to me carefully! I MUST KNOW WHAT THEY ARE GOING TO TALK ABOUT DOWN ON THE BEACH! AND I LOVE THAT HOT DEAN IS DIGGING NATHAN! I LOVE THIS STORY AND YOU MUST NOT KEEP ME WAITING! PLEASE! I LOVE THESE CHARACTERS AND I LOVE YOU FOR MAKING THEM!! YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER! I THINK DEAN SHOULD BE ANGRY DOWN AT THE BEACH WHEN SHE GOES DOWN MAYBE KICKING THE SAND OR SOMETHING, LIKE HES ANGRY AT HIMSELF FOR KISSING HIM BECAUSE NOW HE FEELS REJECTED. AND NATHAN SHOULD PULL AWAY FROM RILEY, A TAD NOW BECAUSE HES A LITTLE CONFUSED... BUT KEEP ME GUESSING ABOUT WHO HE CHOOSES, I MEAN YOUR DOING SUCH A GREAT JOB, KEEP IT UP! PLEASE...! :)

That killed me, it just stopped, like, right there, I swear, I died a little. Please continue, I really like this, makes me smile, it's so good, so adorable, for some odd reason it's hard for me to find slash stories I like, I'm very picky, but this is awesome, so, yeah. Keep up the good work. ^.^



~ Yazumi & Skulls / Mika / Megami-kira.

I'm always surprised by a few stories that don't seem to have many reviews. Maybe this one hasn't been discovered yet. I know the search engine on fictionpress has been flaky. I'd like to see this story continue. Stopping at the kiss is just cruel.

I like how you have set things up. I would be greatful for an update so I can find out what happens next.

TC

I like your storyline and the fact that your characters aren't necessarily run-of-the-mill or cliche. I feel like this has a lot of potential. I'd be happy to beta it =)

Ahh i likes this! How can you even think of it as crappo? Nathan sounds so sweet ^_^ & darn you for the cliffhanger! Update, update, update!

This story is extremely awesome! Update soon!

great story although im kinda starting to think that dean has a secret thing for nate. :P

really good story update asap