Is the Hungarian movie about subway workers in Budapest mentioned in this chapter Kontroll? Because I love, love, love that movie!

really good story :)

the most interesting story i've read on here. :)

but, i have to say this story goes against everything i believe. lol it's a good thing i know what i believe and why :)

Wow. I really loved this story. It was so...interesting.

I liked the comparisons to typical action movies/ James Bond etc.; it was pretty funny. This was a nice read and super intriguing, but I feel like it kind of fizzled out at the end. It was a nice ending, but pretty anticlimactic. Thanks for the read though! I enjoyed it a lot.

Even more interesting! I love your choice of title! I love this new word for Eden.

And the apple...

Oohh. Cool. Yay! Interesting!

Great build-up of suspense! Very intriguing, unique and creative.

o_O!

This has been super interesting to read so far! I love it.

You have no idea how much I appreciated this. Such a nice story. I loved Eric's character and Lucien was very creepy, indeed. The plot was well paced and original as well. Wow, you did a great job! I can't believe you don't have more reviews. This proves once again that quantity is not synonymous to quality. Because this piece of work pretty much rocks. I've got just a small correction to make though. In chapter 11, Eric wrote 'Aimee Clair a un mille sept-cent ans.' He should have omitted the 'un'.

Aww cute story. At the beginning, I was mesmerized by Eric talking to her. I'm happy I stuck to the story =)
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OMG YAY! I love this story SO much! It's amazing!

I have a theory!! Is Lucien the gardner? I remember he left and Aimee chased him!! Am I right?

I love it! The chapter was amazing!

Ooh Orlando Bloom and Pirates were mentioned! They're elves?! That's awesome!